Feedback in responsive session

This session was all about viewing my progress and getting a class member to view both my brief and the responses I produced relating to its content. I received two sheets both for personal and peer feedback.

My feedback was very positive from other peers especially from on the work I did for the KYM Caricatures cartoon competitions which I have already entered. The work I entered is said to be very good in its representation of refugees and the colours used in each picture is well presented. The weakness I identified with my submissions is that they are all same in their representation, because they only feature children and do not consider a wide range of people in relation to the refugee crisis e.g. adults.

If I was to do this again, my characters would be changed in relation to the topic on a whole and I would draw a mixture of adults, children and consider other races in relation to the refugee crisis because there are more races and nationalities involved in this crisis other than Syrians, This would would be used to demonstrate a sense of realism through modern day depiction.