Monday, 24 November 2014

Feedback 1


What is stated on feedback sheet :

Issues discussed at the tutorial :

- Make sure the character looks angry/agitated whilst the wind blows.

- If he is watching TV put noise in the background so that, the situation is convincing.


Student action :

- I will focus on making my character very emotional in movement and appearance, make sure Tv noise is added to background is used as I feel it will add a sense of liveliness to the scenery and something we can all relate to.

I have chosen to take the on the feedback given and will add the features previously stated because I feel it will enhance the image of my background scenery, it will give my work life and meaning because there is more scenery involved.

The main thing I think I need to concentrate on from the feedback would be second motion movement in the background I have now decided that I want no other objects to move in the background a part from the character, this is because I would like to exaggerate the lightness of the character to make him look like he is the only moveable object in the scene, almost like a feather, this is another way of entertaining my target audience.




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