(Critical Report) If I was to do this again ?

I have produced a 2D Animation about the four Seasons with in a year.

My reason for choosing this was because I thought it would be an interesting subject to communicate, I personally do not regret choosing this subject, I personally think the way I have executed the animation could have been better.

If I was to do this project again I would redo all my animated scenes again mainly because I feel the way they are drawn could be drawn a lot better. I feel that the style which I have used does not reflect my artistic skills, not how I would usually draw. The line work on the scene is very thin and small, the way they are drawn could be drawn thicker so that the scenes stand out more. The only reason why this was not done because I drew this animation traditionally and drawing each line took a while each day hours of work. The main thing I would do is make sure I add more features to help capture scenery e.g. animals and Sun plus other assets to help reveal each season a lot better, I feel that my animation could with better if I added a bit more detail to make it look more realistic. I think music would have done well with the sounds, it just feels empty on its own with just three sounds I personally feel it needs something extra to make the animation seem busier.

The visual to the animation is very good the representation of the seasons is said by my work to be looking great the feedback has been very positive about the detail, colour and research into the subject.

Preproduction has been very beneficial, I have done thorough research into the seasons and taken inspiration from Hayao Miyazaki to help me develop a visual style for my scenery and atmosphere. I picked Miyazaki because of how his animation are very friendly especially for children who are my target audience, for this animation used his style to help me capture his very friendly and child like characteristics with in my animation.