Final Crit 2

I have finally received my second round of feedback and on the whole is positive, the only points that need considering is secondary motion with the fire place in the back ground and the light does not show any signs of swinging even thought there is fierce wind blowing in the background, and there is no view of the window until it changes to first person perspective and certain frames to do with the characters movement needs adjusting. The windows need to look like they are open wide in the animation until the character shuts them.

I will sort out my fire place and add in a darker red to my orange to make it look like the fire is changing in a few frames due to the wind being really strong blowing it in the opposite direction. I am deciding to add more colour because I think the change of colour will give the fire meaning with in the scene and will make it look like it has a bit of motion going on because it is very still at the moment and needs improving because the character is the only one moving and surely the fire will be effected by a very wind. The light at the top of the scene should move because the wind is strong and it would not make sense if it stayed still making the animation not look very effective because it is not communicating what it is supposed to through the use of secondary animation. Sort out certain glitchy movements and jittering and make sure the window opens and closes while it is being hammered shut to show the force of the wind

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