Over all I am very proud of my animation and its content mainly for how it runs and the detail added makes the piece look a lot more realistic along with the use of reggae music in the background. The colour schemes and background need a little improvement but I think that there is more time needed in order to adjust these mistakes. The feedback alone has been very constructive and the details of what needed changing is clear the main feedback given has stated the main changes that needed to be made but the clear and identify able mistakes made and why they need changing. The issue with my animation has been made obviously easy, I plan to delete the unimportant scenes and keep the needed frames.
My plan now is to delete a few of the unimportant scenes to narrow my animation down to 30 seconds, I will make sure that the text in each scene is aligned and placed into the yellow caption boxes instead of separate captions, because it was said to be really confusing and did not make really make much sense. The text in the beginning needs changing, because there are too many colours used so my objective is to simplify elements my captions and resize my text, the music need to fade because it cut too early and does not follow through properly until the end.
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